Using AI to Write Sales Emails (Without Sounding Like a Robot)

 AI can help you write. But it can’t help you care.

🤖 Hook:

Most AI sales emails sound like this:

“Hi [First Name], I hope this message finds you well. I noticed that…”

Delete.
Buyers don’t want emails.
They want relevance. Realness. Rhythm.

And yes — AI can help.
But only if you stop treating it like a template machine.

🧐 The 3 Big AI Email Mistakes

1. Generic intros

   • If your first line could apply to anyone, it speaks to no one.

2. Over-polished fluff

   • AI tends to write “nicely” — not persuasively.

3. No POV

   • AI without your insight = empty noise.

✅ How Real Closers Use AI

Use AI to:

• Summarize a LinkedIn post or interview

• Pull out 3 pain points from a company website

• Rewrite your email in a more concise tone

• Suggest alternate subject lines based on urgency

Don’t use AI to:

• Replace your voice

• Guess what your buyer cares about

• Write entire cold emails from scratch

✍️ Jack’s Method: Punch + Personal + Pressure

“AI is my assistant. I’m still the closer.”

Jack’s workflow:

• He finds a real buyer signal (post, quote, product update)

• Tells AI: “Summarize this in 1 line, make it punchy”

• Then adds a line that challenges the buyer’s current state

His goal? Create tension without being a jerk.

🧠 Alicia’s Tone Filter

“AI doesn’t sound like a human. That’s your job.”

Alicia uses AI to:

• Brainstorm angles

• Find emotional language

• Test structure

Then she asks:
Would I say this to someone face-to-face?
If not — she edits it.

⚙ Monica’s Prompt System

“Garbage prompts = garbage emails.”

Monica sets her AI up like this:

You’re a sales assistant writing for a high-ticket closer.
Tone: bold, concise, real.
Audience: busy founders.
Goal: trigger curiosity in 3 lines max.

She tests 3 variations, picks the sharpest, then tweaks.

🧠 FredCo’s Final Rule

“If AI saves you time but costs you attention — you lose.”

FredCo teaches:

• Let AI write the first draft

• Always rewrite the first line yourself

• Focus on one buyer truth per message

• Use AI to serve insight — not automation

📣 CTA:

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